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31/01/2020 at 11:28am
Suddenly, out of nowhere, a large ledge slapped me hard in the face. My eyes opened. I looked around, noticing I was still metres above the ground. Then - realising I was about to roll off the edge - I grabbed it. Clinging on for dear life, I glanced around desperately searching for a plan. I found one. Taking a deep breath, I swang back before plunging through the window beneath the ledge. Once I was inside, I exited the building, completely unnotciced by the confused police, before riding my skateboard home.
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Oliver, you have been extremely effective in combining short, sharp sentences with longer ones to build up a sense of tension. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next!
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