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31/01/2020 at 11:28am
To finish our Oliver Twist fiction topic, can you write a paragraph where Oliver meets Mr Brownlow again and lives happily ever after. Remember that he will be delighted to see him - think about the emotions that Oliver will be feeling and how your vocabulary can reflect these feelings.
As well as our previous ones, can you include our apostrophe layered targets:
Bronze - Use apostrophes to show where words have been shortened (don't)
Silver - Use apostrophes to show singular possesion (Oliver's glasses)
Gold - Use apostrophes to show plural possession (The boys' group hut - when you are talking about a group of boys)
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Oliver waited and waited intill the grim night appeared Oliver's eyes started watering as he burst into pain.A man suddenly appeared on the horrizen in a dim-lit horse drawn cart in a crazy top-hat and curly hair swaying as the wind pushed aginst it.Oliver said "is that him?..."
eventually he came to a stop at the house Mr.Brownlow once lived in.Oliver sai"sir, are you Mr.Brownlow?...."
the strange crazy looking man said"yes...Oliver is that you?!"
Oliver said Yes sir."
Oliver started to cry and darted towards Mr.brownlow he was really happy and exitedthey set off into the house and lived happily ever after.
"i finaly am going to have a happy life." He realy was exsited as in a horse and carrage he confortably sat waiting to see the house wich he will be now living in with Mr Browlow.
And he lived in a lovely summer house for the rest of his life. He lived happely ever after
"Oliver!" Mr Brownlow exclaimed, overwhelmed with joy. The excited mouse-like boy was given an enormous hug by Mr Brownlow." Where have you been?"
"It's a long story" said the adventurous boy as they skipped joyfully into the small brown cottage.
"Mr Brownlow, is that really you?" called Oliver. "Yes" answered Mr. Brownlow, "Where have you been?". Oliver smiled, "It's a long story..."
"Where have you been?" Mr Brownlow asked "I've looked every where for you".