A persuasive letter for another Science and Engineering week


Dear Mr Ryan,

I would like to thank you for organizing and putting together the amazing science and engineering week. We all learned something new whilst having fun. Therefore making it the best and most exiting school week ever! I learnt how to build a circuit with a switch and a working motor. Here is a quote from a school child who also enjoyed science and engineering week "I really enjoyed being creative and showing of my engineering skills" Everyone wants to learn more about science and engineering because everyone from reception all the way to year six enjoyed it even the adults did. So why not do it again next year?

Yours sincerely

Archie Davis-Grant


Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by Mr Bailey on 21 Mar 12 at 8:37am | Quote this comment
Another great blog from Archie - you're really leading the way with the independent class posts,. Thank you very much.
Great rhetorical question and well done for backing up your arguments with examples.
Challenge! Can you get a quote in there to make it even more powerful?
Comment 2 Comment by Abbie D on 21 Mar 12 at 7:19pm | Quote this comment
Archie I like the compound sentence you have in your persuasive letter well done.
Comment 3 Comment by Brendan K on 23 Mar 12 at 8:16pm | Quote this comment
I agree the letter was great well done Archie

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