Mythical island returns 2014!

One month later….


Tiffany was lost in gloomy pitch black forest. There were to paths, one were going left one were going right. When she walked to the right path she heard a little crying noise behind the bush! When she looked behind her, she saw a crystal pony and the pony’s leg was stuff in a massive rock! Tiffany said “OH NO!” in horror. Tiffany got a stick and stuck it in the rock and started to pull… them the crystal pony was at last FREE the pony talked and said “Thank you” in a miniature quiet voice, Tiffany was amazed and shocked both at the same time. “Can you hear me?” Tiffany said. The pony replied “Umm… Yes why?” “Well… You see I was just wondering…” Said Tiffany Back. “How may I help you?” Said the pony Tiffany said “well I just wanted to know where this some say “Crystal empire”. Then the crystal pony said “I know where it is because I live there” Said the pony. Then Tiffany said “well are you going to show me where it is?” Then the pony said “umm ok” 


Find out soon if they will get there by Gwen and Michelle  

Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by Dillon E on 27 Jan 14 at 10:09am | Quote this comment
Good punctuation such as:
speech marks
question mark
explanation mark
Comment 2 Comment by Olivia B on 27 Jan 14 at 10:10am | Quote this comment
your language is very exiting and wants the readers to know more! very good work gwen and michelle. :lol:
Comment 3 Comment by Millie M on 27 Jan 14 at 10:12am | Quote this comment
you had some really good wow words and also you left it on a clifhanger cant to read what is next. 8)

lexie and millie
Comment 4 Comment by Benjamin M on 27 Jan 14 at 10:13am | Quote this comment
Very good love the pony is very discriptive :D
Comment 5 Comment by Jennifer W on 27 Jan 14 at 10:15am | Quote this comment
i love the idea and the descriptive languge is great to :roll:
Comment 6 Comment by Jessica R on 27 Jan 14 at 10:18am | Quote this comment
I like how you have started with One mounth later. :-)
Comment 7 Comment by Poppy F on 27 Jan 14 at 10:21am | Quote this comment
Amazing story gwen and michelle. :P

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