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THE CHRISTMAS NIGHTMARE!(Part 1)
THE CHRISTMAS NIGHTMARE
Part one
Ben and Dillon where driving along an isolated desert. Flashes of lightning roars of thunder and rain as hard as bullets were hitting the roof of the car. “I think we should stop and rest at this abandoned shack.”
“Wait a minute Dillon who is that person at the door in the long black cloak.”
“I’m not sure but it does not look good….. Wait this is where I used to live we need to go NOW quick, go just get in the car. Open the door and get in. Put your foot down."
“Why did we need to go so suddenly?”
“My father and mother disappeared here and became ghouls. So I ran a way and ever since they have been trying to make me one of them.”
Comments that people have made about this blog post
In your next Chapter, can you add a little more description to go alongside the dialogue, to add even more tension?
I am really looking forward to reading it (gulp - it is a little scary!)