Dark Nativity - Part One


I walked down the alleyway, intimidated by the moving shadows. I was walking to my Christmas production on my own. My mum couldn’t walk me as she was working. Suddenly, a giggle alerted me. It was a short creepy giggle but it still freaked me out. Another giggle. Then I saw a small balloon floating around the corner behind me. I started to run. I panted. Footsteps echoing. Then I turned to look behind me. The balloon was following close behind...

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 20 Dec 13 at 12:57pm | Quote this comment
James, you talked to me about how you chose to write in small sentences to build the tension. I love your idea about being followed by a mysterious balloon - very spooky.

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