Anything Is Out There

Chapter 1   On the run

They were running, they had to get away, they couldn’t turn back…                                      

Robin and Claris Crovers were on the run, they didn’t have a mother or father to look after them, let alone to love them.       

Their mother had sadly passed away when the children were still infant age; she had left them alone with there, originally, friendly father. The father then became miserable, in addition to this a scared man. He forgot all the happy things in life, being so desperate he unthinkably married another woman, Kim. The new mother to these unfortunate siblings was cruel and spiteful towards them. The only hope that they had left was their sweet Appaloosa (horse) Nutmeg. This friendly beast had a coat which was as black as the night and soft as silk.

But now they were here in the middle of nowhere. Anything was out there, anything could get them… Robin and Claris had been away from the place called home for many days now consequently dying of starvation; little did they now the person who hated them most of all had followed them every step of the way to the small clearing in the forest and was plotting something most terrible, so frightening I can’t even describe or write it down on this piece of paper.

Written by Ellie, Izzy and Peggy-Sue

To be continued...

Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by jennifer on 03 Dec 13 at 8:25pm | Quote this comment
Great smiles can't wait for chapter 2
Comment 2 Comment by Olivia B on 03 Dec 13 at 8:43pm | Quote this comment
I quite like the tension in this piece of story writing! :D It's really great.
Comment 3 Comment by Niamh on 04 Dec 13 at 8:35pm | Quote this comment
this story is so griping and tense.I loved the beginning when you wrote something like"they ran and ran ,they had to get away, they couldn't turn back"because you started of in a way which makes you want to carry on reading it to find out who are the people running and running and why. I can't wait for the second chapter. AWESOME!!!
Comment 4 Comment by Mrs Arnold on 06 Dec 13 at 10:58am | Quote this comment
Well done girls! A great opening to your chapter. I also like the way you've tried to show characters viewpoints through your writing, for example, 'he unthinkably married' and 'the place called home'.
Comment 5 Comment by Poppy F on 06 Dec 13 at 10:49pm | Quote this comment
I really liked it can't wait to see what comes next.

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