chapter 3 unanswered questions!

                                                            Chapter 3

Stepping up the creaking stairs Holly opened the oak, cracked door. The dull lights were still flashing in the darkness.She walked slowly through the cobwebbed room; the door slammed shut behind and the rusty old lock turned! It can't of been her Granny she can't move out of her chair without Holly's help, and it certainly wasn't Holly.

"Ahhhhhhhhhh!" she screamed vigorously.

"Help me...please" continuously yelling, whilst hitting the door dramatically with her blistered hands. She started to think that she wasn't alone...

looking  at the floor, she saw the splintering box staring into her bewildered eyes.

"It's locked."

Trying to open the box, She saw a frizzy haired shadow lunging over her. She turned her head. Nothing was there. The box finally opened, Holly saw many pictures of clowns not her family, but they were not just photos, they had notes on them. They had sentences on them saying 'i've got you, your trapped' The words started to echo around the room...

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 04 Jul 13 at 10:37am | Quote this comment
This is the best Chapter yet! The language that you are using is really evoking the theme of fear within the story. I love this idea of the objects inside the box being a surprise each time.
Comment 2 Comment by Mrs Arnold on 05 Jul 13 at 11:33am | Quote this comment
I'm not sure I want to read on - I'm already biting my nails! Well done girls!
Comment 3 Comment by Lucy B on 05 Jul 13 at 5:17pm | Quote this comment
Whoooooa!! What a spooky story!! Well done!! Can you make chapter 4, PLEASE?! :lol:

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