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Film scripts - live!
Class New Zealand are adding our most effective pieces of description from our film scripts as we are writing them - live!
The camera slowly edges out revealing Harry's stunned and amazed face, as he stops one foot away from the train.
Hesitantly, Harry opened a small beady eye to reveal a sparkly glistning pupil (EXT zoom out to reveal a young cheery face)
Hastily, he clambered down the bridge, immediatly swallowed up in the mist of the crowd.
His eyes crinkle up like a towel thats been used 100 times.
Camera pans around to see many excited people pushing vast trunks with owls on top.
He closes them again and picks up the pace, his hands squeeze the trolley's handles as he prepares for the crash.
umbrellas of smoke cover chattering people
To the left of the scene is the shimering sign that reads 'Hogwarts' Express'
Camera instantly turns 90 degrees to the right to display the outstanding hogwarts express.
CAMERA goes close up on groups of people chatting and laughing under a bklanket of velvet, gnarly smoke.
Looking for an empty carrige Harry see's a large boy hanging out the glass window.
He pushes his old, wooden suit case to an empty seat of the slender train.
Comments that people have made about this blog post
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Really good language - Dylan.
Brilliant adjectives like 'slender' - Isaac.
I like the way it tells you about how the camera moves - Julia
I like the part where it says 'the camera slowly edges out...' because I think it is quite effective. - Fin
I like the description about his eyes being like a towel because it really describes how his eyes look - Luis
The phrases like 'gnarly smike' and 'umbrellas of smoke really pull you in. - Lily & Kate