The Robbery

 Sirens wailed in every direction deafening me as I peered over the edge of the bank's roof. "Get down 'ere you pesky teenager," yelled a voice many metres below "Or I'll shoot!" Thoughts jam-packed my brain, pushing and shoving their way to the front of my mind. But only one stood out. I don't want to but I have to. Suddenly, with a jet of speed, I sprinted to the opposite edge of the building. As I reached the mighty drop I closed my eyes. Before leaping into the darkness of the night.   

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 06 Feb 13 at 8:57am | Quote this comment
Oliver, great blog post. I love then ending, where the leap into darkness makes the reader intruiged as to what happens next.
Comment 2 Comment by Mr Ryan on 07 Feb 13 at 1:09pm | Quote this comment
A compelling start, Oliver - more please!

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