Nancy's mission

Fagin bellowed to Nancy,"Find that wretched boy, or else.....". Cowering with fear, Nancy rushed off terrified, to search for Oliver. As she ran through streets danewness was beginning to fall, people were rushing home to their cosy fires. Nancy felt cold and alone. She knew she had to do this otherwise this would be the end of her. Only too well she knew what Fagin was capable of...

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Comment 1 Comment by Mrs Arnold on 07 Dec 12 at 10:04am | Quote this comment
Well done Oliver. You have used some effective vocabulary 'cowering with fear'. I also like the impact your short sentence - 'Nancy felt cold and alone' - has on the reader. Is danewness the correct word?
Comment 2 Comment by Mr Ryan on 07 Dec 12 at 9:34pm | Quote this comment
Impressive narrative, Oliver! You leave us on a cliffhanger too.

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