Oliver twist meets the treacherous fagins gang

He opened the cob-webed door there were ragged clothed boys some were smoking,one of the boys was sat in a moss -covered corner shoving dry tobacco into a smoking pipe.A crinkle-faced man slowly approached  the shy-faced boy"who's this pruny boy then e'h tell me your name then" said the scary-looking man fagin.

"oliver thats my name"said the skiny little boy,

the man handed him some mouldy sausages there was something suspicious about this man, oliver thought, what was it?  

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 02 Dec 12 at 8:46pm | Quote this comment
Some great adjectives.

Could you have improved your capital letters?
Comment 2 Comment by Natasha W on 03 Dec 12 at 3:52pm | Quote this comment
yes i could i will do that as a growing green for my next blog :-)

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