Oliver gets to Cardiff

Finally Oliver had reached Cardiff but had no food, no drink and nowhere to sleep! So he wearily, slumped down onto a cold, stone door step. Suddenly a suprising tap on the shoulder shook him out of his day-dream. then before he could turn around a short, dark haired, double chinned, ugly boy with blue eyes, launched infront of him. "Hello''Said a young boy with a confident voice.                          

"I am the Artful Dodger!'' He asked him if he had anywhere to bunk so Oliver replied no.

"Hungry?'' Questioned Dodger. Once again Oliver said "No'' But Dodger knew he was starving and tossed him an apple he produced from one of his many filled  pockets.                                                                                                                            

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 02 Dec 12 at 8:50pm | Quote this comment
Some fantastic vocabulary, Syd.

Can you spot where you could have started new paragraphs in your speech?

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