Fire Burning

Yesterday Esther and I wrote a short but effective descriptive setting, and here it is:

I strolled mindlessly along the golden paved path, the ground was damp and rough against my burnt fragile feet. The path was slippery from lastnights rain. On the other side of the path a small soggy grass patch lay against the crumbling soil . Waving in fear, the scent of freshly mowed grass filled my lungs.

I looked ahead and in the distance, I caught a glimpse of a burning-hot fire clawing at the delicate trees  as they whispered in pain. I heard the guests screaching in terror, one person's burning body lay helplessly on the dew covered ground...I stepped closer but then the fire hit me like a lightning bolt. 

  By Esther and Lucy

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