Flying !!!

“I can FLY!!!!!!!!!!” screamed Bill rapidly falling. SPLASH, THUD. Nobody dared to speak. Apart from one girl, that was clearly his daughter, who simply ran inside screaming. Almost immediately she called 999 and explained what had happened while the rest of the people at the party tried to drag him out of the water. Two minutes later the deafening sound of sirens was getting nearer and nearer. By the time paramedics were at the scene bill could barely breath, his family and friends were beginning to grieve. As the paramedics began their strange talking and urgent checks, to most people it looked bad. He was lying dead still.

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Stanton on 12 Dec 12 at 12:56pm | Quote this comment
Great to see you use a complex sentence Grace!

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