Our trip to The Golden Hinde

Class Caribbean, 

I wonder if you can write comments for the photographs below that give a recount of our recent excursion to London?

Remember to use time connectives, superb wow words and correct punctuation to explain what is happening in the pictures.

I look forward to reading your memories of a fabulous day!


From Miss Loxley


Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by lauren on 23 Sep 12 at 10:38am | Quote this comment
facts about the golden Hinde
1.22 guns 2.used to be called the pelican
3. 102 mtrs long 20 mtrs wide
4. hold's 80-85 people
Comment 2 Comment by Evie S on 24 Sep 12 at 6:26pm | Quote this comment
My favourite part of the golden hinde was when capten Ine was giving us nicknames.
In the first pichere there is a man talking to some of us about wot he was dowing in the tate galirey.
The third PIcher is of mayse,jame and charly in the captens cabbin on the golden hinde.some of us led on the captens bed.
In the next pitcher captain Ian is asking us questions about what some of things on the boat are.
This is a picher is of us sat arawnd abig table.
The last picher is in the gun room .people were dong things with the gun.for ecsamle clening the gun.
over all I had a super day. :P
Comment 3 Comment by Zoe B on 27 Sep 12 at 7:04pm | Quote this comment
Jamie was asked to clean the cannon with a ramrod . Basically there is a cloth on the end of the stick which he pushed in really hard and scrubbed around to clean the cannon then he took it out and there its cleaned as simple as that.
Comment 4 Comment by Mrs Loxley on 28 Sep 12 at 1:40pm | Quote this comment
What interesting and informative memories of our trip. Well done team!

Miss Loxley

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