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The Mysterious Figure

The mysterious figure!

(Who am I as the writer? A Horror writer)
(Who are you writing for? 9 to 13 year olds)
(What effect are you trying to create? A feeling of scariness)

Ingredients for our writing:

1 listed adjectives
2 slimly
3 prepositional phrases
4 powerful adverbs
5 powerful verbs
6 senses
7 rhetorical questions


A mysterious figure hovered in her abandoned mansion looking for children to boil in the caldron. Also she banged her broom on the stone floor her servant would come to the rigid and give her some juicy children to boil and eat for her dinner. The mysterious figure looked about 5, 8 foot tall and very wide she was as big as an ELEPHANT!!

The mysterious figure looked liked she was terribly poor the clothes witch were old ripped and muddy. She smelt like she hadn’t had a shower in ages.

YOU NEVER NO SHE MAYBE LURKING AROUND YOUR HOUSE?

By Dylan B and Oliver H.
 

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