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A fantasy garden

The  animal like bushes  gaze over at the rainbow flowers in the garden of the  ghostly castle.

The garden has been neatly clipped in to shapely pathways, borders and topiary.

The castle looks sad  and lifeless but the happy  green creatures  look as though they will pounce

any second NOW............

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Bailey on 19 Feb 12 at 12:59pm | Quote this comment
Great use of personification Saskia - 'The animal like bushes gaze over at the rainbow flowers'
Comment 2 Comment by Abbie D on 27 Feb 12 at 7:47pm | Quote this comment
Saskia I love the bit were it says The castle looks sad and lifeless but the happy green creatures look as though they will pounce any second NOW......... :lol:
Comment 3 Comment by Edward T on 27 Feb 12 at 11:28pm | Quote this comment
Well done Saskia! you used lots of descriptive language to help the reader picture the garden in their head.Great work!!!

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