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A dark dark tale

Once upon a time there was a dark,dark moor. On the moor was a very very dark wood. In the wood there was a dark castle with misty windows. At the front of the castle was a mysterious door. Behind the old door was a cobwebbed hall with spiders. In the hall there was a white creepey staircase. Up the creepy stairs was a spooky passage. Across the spooky passage was an unwanted  curtain. Behind the spiderey curtain was a wet,damp eerie empty  room. In that room was an old woodon cupboard. In the cupboard was a shelf. On the shelf was a corner. On the corner was a shimmering box. In the shimmering box was a tiny little room with a........ what do you think is in the box?

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Bailey on 01 Feb 12 at 12:44pm | Quote this comment
A great first attempt at your own blog Lizzy. Next time, your challenge is to link some of your sentences together with joining words (good examples can be found on our class washing line). For example: In the hall there was a white creepey staircase and up the creepy stairs was a spooky passage. I'm sure you could use a better word than 'and'.
Comment 2 Comment by Lillie W on 01 Feb 12 at 7:20pm | Quote this comment
Good work lizzie. Great descriptive vocabulary. :lol:

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