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Golden Jewels

Golden jewels surrounded 3 children with glowing wands that broke through the twilight dark room. One separate candelabra stood there like a stone statue, watching over the jewellry below. Two  dwarfs  with witch like hooked noses perched in front of an ancient silver painted wooden door. Their beady eyes stared at the children, watching their every move. Platinum owls were encased in glass domes above the shimmering money. 

 

 

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Comment 1 Comment by Archie D on 31 Jan 12 at 8:28pm | Quote this comment
A brilliant descriptive setting Max Well done ! :-)
Comment 2 Comment by Jack T on 31 Jan 12 at 8:35pm | Quote this comment
The descriptive words are brilliant i really like it!!!!
Comment 3 Comment by Mr Bailey on 01 Feb 12 at 12:15pm | Quote this comment
Archie and Jack you have shown great maturity with your positive and sensible comments well done to you both - let's hope the others follow suit.

Max, I love the line : 'perched in front of an ancient silver painted wooden door', it helps create a real image in my mind's eye.
Comment 4 Comment by Dylan B on 02 Feb 12 at 6:46pm | Quote this comment
A brilliant descriptive setting. I especially
like the word twilight black room.Well done!!!! :lol: :lol:

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