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Icicle Dream Part 1

It was Christmas day in a small village not far from where Santa's Grotto was placed. "It's Christmas, It's Chrsitmas" screamed Lucy as she ran down the staircase. Her eyes were timid to see what was inside the biggest present by the tree. Lucy opened her present it said on the front: FRAGILE THIS ITEM SHOULD BE TREASURED. She opened it a little more and it was a......

 

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Comment 1 Comment by Eloise W on 22 Jan 14 at 12:43pm | Quote this comment
This is a great starter mimi :D
Comment 2 Comment by Ellie K on 27 Jan 14 at 10:12am | Quote this comment
I love the detail, it is amazing as you can feel as though if you are in the village. You fill up with curiosity. A great piece of writting. Can't wait for part two! :D
Comment 3 Comment by Eloise W on 27 Jan 14 at 10:14am | Quote this comment
You end this amazing part on a cliff hanger :lol:

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