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HIDDEN BY A BOULDER ~ Chapter 1 ~

Nim and Jack ran down to the little path that leads from their garden to the woods positioned on the hill above their house. They were not running away from anything, though that is what you would guess from the tremendous speed they were going. They were actually running towards something. Something that no one but they knew about, and not even they knew what it really was. They raced excitedly down to the ancient oak, turned down the little path which led to a secret clearing, which only the children knew about. In the middle of the space there was a boulder undamaged by weather, age or human existence, the children ran towards it and then suddenly disappeared. Had they gone under it? Over it? Or h, h, had they gone into it…?

Nelly P and Jenny W

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 20 Dec 13 at 10:05am | Quote this comment
Nelly and Jenny, I love the way that you have created suspense in this opening to make the reader want to read on. Personally, I can't wait for the next Chapter!
Comment 2 Comment by Ellie K on 20 Dec 13 at 11:42am | Quote this comment
I love all of the description that has gone into the opening of this adventurous story. Keep up the writting Nellie and Jenny!!! :lol:
Comment 3 Comment by Peggy Sue P on 20 Dec 13 at 11:48am | Quote this comment
well done cant wait for the next chapter great puntuaition :lol:
Comment 4 Comment by Eloise W on 30 Dec 13 at 6:18pm | Quote this comment
I agree with Mr Jones
Good luck on the next part ;-)
Comment 5 Comment by Ellen B on 27 Jan 14 at 10:16am | Quote this comment
great story I love it :D

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