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Escape!

Suddenly, out of nowhere, a large ledge slapped me hard in the face. My eyes opened. I looked around, noticing I was still metres above the ground. Then - realising I was about to roll off the edge - I grabbed it. Clinging on for dear life, I glanced around desperately searching for a plan. I found one. Taking a deep breath, I swang back before plunging through the window beneath the ledge. Once I was inside, I exited the building, completely unnotciced by the confused police, before riding my skateboard home.

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 19 Feb 13 at 11:13am | Quote this comment
Oliver, you have been extremely effective in combining short, sharp sentences with longer ones to build up a sense of tension. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next!
Comment 2 Comment by Mr Ryan on 19 Feb 13 at 3:09pm | Quote this comment
Attention grabbing narrative, Oliver! I like it. How about a continuation to find out where you're thinking of going next?

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