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Oliver is shot

Olive set off into the dark dingy night.Bill sykes the man taking him was a mean no mercy man he would shoot anyone in his path.They arrived at the house.Bill told Oliver to get into a small window on the side of the dim-lit moss-covered building.Bill cracked open the rotted window and shoved Oliver through.Oliver ran upstairs alerting the people there the next thing he knew was a fierce hot pain in his arm he fainted......

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Comment 1 Comment by Mr Jones on 02 Dec 12 at 8:47pm | Quote this comment
Some fantastic vocabulary Dylan.

Could you have included some speech?

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