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Fast Poems

Class India, it was great to see you enjoying the 'Fast Poems' we did in Literacy this morning - sorry we couldn't read more out! However... we now have a blog! So, if you want to type your poem up for others to see or add a new one then please do. Feel free to move away from food and use a different noun as your inspiration. See if you can guess what my new poem is about:

Rectangular and white, (2 adjectives)
Carefully, quickly, frantically, (3 adverbs)
Opening, loading, clicking, closing. (4 verbs)

First person to 'comment' the answer gets 2TPs.

Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by Tarragon N on 07 Oct 11 at 6:10pm | Quote this comment
Is it a computer?
Comment 2 Comment by Simon A on 08 Oct 11 at 7:42am | Quote this comment
Is it an email?
Comment 3 Comment by Mr Herring on 08 Oct 11 at 8:46am | Quote this comment
It is a computer - an Apple MacBook no less! Although it could just as easily have been an email - both really good guesses! How about you both now write your own fast poem for all of us to guess? Look forward to reading them!
Comment 4 Comment by Simon A on 10 Oct 11 at 6:43pm | Quote this comment
Red and glossy,
Quickly, happily, greedily,
Sucking, bursting, dangling, disappearing.

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Take a guess!
Comment 5 Comment by Mr Herring on 10 Oct 11 at 8:16pm | Quote this comment
Dangling? Hmmm. Is it some sort of fruit - maybe a cherry?
Comment 6 Comment by Mr Ryan on 11 Oct 11 at 7:07am | Quote this comment
Tricky one, Simon. It's not bubble gum is it?
Comment 7 Comment by Tarragon N on 12 Oct 11 at 8:50am | Quote this comment
sweet and bitter,
greedily,passionately,quickly
and going...going...GONE!

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Have a Guess!
Comment 8 Comment by Jude W on 12 Oct 11 at 9:10am | Quote this comment
Is it chocalate Tarragon?
Comment 9 Comment by Tarragon N on 12 Oct 11 at 9:13am | Quote this comment
No, but close Jude.

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