Don't Forget...

....school term ends on Friday 15th December at 2.30pm

Tuesday at 3:42pm

 Ingredients:
1. Complex sentence
2. Propositional phrase                                                    
3. High level 5 punctuation
4. Hyphenated words
5. Powerful verbs, adverbs and adjectives
6. Listed adjectives
7. Compound sentence                                                                                                
Who are you as the writer: Horror writer
who is your audience: Teenagers
Purpose/ Effect: Slightly scary 

                                                     The mysterious creature

The five-foot tall creature stood rummaging through the oversized baked bean tins looking for scraps to eat. His cloak ,was jagged and scragged, which drooped down, from his egg shaped head leaving it uncovered. Its spindly long arm stuck out so everyone who walks past him will get beaten by his bony skeleton like fingers.
His hair was spiked up like he had been in a battle or been dragged through a hedge. The ears was as large as elephant ears that was stuck to his bumpy skin. Pointy, the nose curved and protruded outwards to the ground, the nose was on his semi circled head. The mouth had a sinister smile as if something was about to happen....

Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by Mr Bailey on 21 Feb 12 at 2:00pm | Quote this comment
Abby, I love the line: 'been dragged through a hedge' creates a rather vivid image in my head of a really scruffy character - super writing.
Comment 2 Comment by Ebony J on 27 Feb 12 at 7:06pm | Quote this comment
Abbie, i really like the adjectives you have used! Some of the words you have used, such as 'the oversized baked bean tins', make a very creative picture in my mind! Well done! :lol:
Comment 3 Comment by Anna G on 29 Feb 12 at 7:22pm | Quote this comment
A brilliant blog Abbie . The ellipse really drew me in !
Comment 4 Comment by Saskia N on 05 Mar 12 at 12:18pm | Quote this comment
amazing work :lol:

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