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...St Mary's Church fete on Saturday 14th July

02/07/2018 at 2:22pm

There is a stack of grey massive rocks by the side of a wide sandy path in a jungle. On the left of the path are tall, bushy, emerald green trees.

In front of the trees a toffy coloured dog, which has a nose like a chocolate button, is leaping madly. Opposite the dog is a grey, glum old man, resting on a walking stick partly made of tennis balls!

The man is glancing at a boy scout, wearing a sash full of badges and a necker, riding an enormous colourful bird. It has a long giraffe neck and rainbow coloured feathers. The boy is waving his arm wildly in the air.
 

Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by Elizabeth F on 17 Feb 12 at 9:52am | Quote this comment
I like how you have exspland the wide sandey path
Comment 2 Comment by Mr Bailey on 19 Feb 12 at 12:54pm | Quote this comment
I just love the description of the dog Archie, 'toffee coloured' - super.
Comment 3 Comment by Oliver H on 25 Feb 12 at 4:42pm | Quote this comment
I liked how you discribed the boy scout is riding an enormous colourful bird.
Comment 4 Comment by Archie C on 26 Feb 12 at 6:54pm | Quote this comment
Nice description of the tree and the dogs nose Archie.
Comment 5 Comment by Max W on 27 Feb 12 at 7:59am | Quote this comment
I really like how you'v used glance when you said the man is glancing at a boy scout!!!!
Comment 6 Comment by Dylan B on 27 Feb 12 at 7:04pm | Quote this comment
I loved how you described emerald green trees.
Comment 7 Comment by Abbie D on 27 Feb 12 at 7:42pm | Quote this comment
Archie I love the complex sentence you had - on the left of the path are tall, bushy, emerald green trees :lol:
Comment 8 Comment by Jamie C on 27 Feb 12 at 9:04pm | Quote this comment
Wow Archie I really like the bit when you describe the dogs nose being like a chocolate button. :lol:
Comment 9 Comment by Sam M on 28 Feb 12 at 7:21am | Quote this comment
Archie i really how you describe the old man as a grey,glum old man, resting on a walking stick partly made of tennis balls!

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