Don't Forget...

...Year 6 SATs week starts on Monday 14th May

16/04/2018 at 4:20pm

In the wood land, Erik was in his house and decided to go for a walk. He told his mum and dad he was going to be a little late home for dinner. As he was walking in the forest he found a cottage that was going up in flames. He cautiously tiptoed closer to investigate. Whoosh! Erik got caught in the claws of a huge purple and red dragon!

Find out what happens next week...

By Matthew and Rufus
 

Comments that people have made about this blog post

Comment 1 Comment by Mr Herring on 20 Jan 12 at 3:33pm | Quote this comment
An interesting start to a story - some descriptive language would really help me to picture the setting. Can anyone suggest an adjective or adverb that we could edit in?
Comment 2 Comment by Mr Ryan on 20 Jan 12 at 4:51pm | Quote this comment
"ivory, flesh-shredding" to go with 'claws'?

A promising start, boys. A little more description to accompany the action will transform it from good to great.

Add your own comment below

Security code

Head's Tweet

from Mr Ryan

Thank you to all those who were involved in Saturday's Flowers and Play event. See photos in the News section...

3 hours ago

km6